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Osgiliath

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straight forward pencils. roughly 18x24
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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I'll start with this: I do like it. The lines are clean, the scene is clear and its definitely distinctive. As far as technicality goes, youre pretty spot on. I notice the shading is pretty black and white (no pun intended), like.....i dont know hw to describe it. a little more....seguay would be nice, like smoother transitions from light to dark. Of course, not in all places, as contrast is a key to pencil sketching. Personally, I like a scene with more interaction, more happening. I just don;t feel that this city is alive. But maybe that's what you were going for. Just saying. All in all, you are seriously talented.